Dale Carnegie said, "Talk in terms of the other man's
interests."
Writing effective web copy begins with a clear understanding of
the goals and objectives of your internet strategy. Are you
trying to persuade the visitor to buy something? Are you trying
to get them to sign up for your newsletter? Perhaps you want
them to join your organization or simply learn more about your
service so that they will call your 800 number. The common theme
with all of these web strategies is that you are trying to get
someone you have never met and can't see to take a step toward
building a relationship with you or your organization.
Typical website copy uses a great deal of prime real estate
telling the web audience how wonderful the organization is.
Imagine going to a party and meeting someone who talks endlessly
about himself. He talks about his job, his family, his
interests. How long will you stand there and listen before
politely excusing yourself? Now imagine the party guest who
seems more interested in you- your family, your job, your
interests. Wouldn't you react more favorably? It's very similar
on the Internet.
It is very tempting to write web copy that is focused on your
company. Your first thought is probably something like, "I have
to tell them who I am. They don't know anything about me." In
reality, they don't care! (At least not in the first few
seconds). Most web users are on a mission to find as much
information as quickly as possible about the product or service
they need because they want to make a decision. If they find
your page, they first thing they want to know - even before
bothering with anything else - is how they will benefit from
buying (subscribing, calling, joining). You need to answer that
question clearly and concisely within seconds or you will lose
that visitor (maybe forever). If you can't cut through the
selfish copy, the clutter, the fancy graphics, and communicate
the value you offer that nobody else offers, they will go
somewhere else- and likely never come back.
Here are 3 additional ideas to help with effective web copy: 1.
Create an effective Unique Selling Proposition (USP): A USP is
the statement (2-3 sentences at most) that explains why you are
different than everyone else. This is the unique factor that
sets you apart from your competition. Make this the first thing
your visitor sees. 2. Write about what you offer. Focus on
benefits (not features) and de-emphasize your organization. The
website visitor needs to understand the value in a relationship
with you. 3. Use your copy to help steer your visitor down an
intended path. This can be accomplished by placing your "Point
of action" near benefits-related text, making it easier for your
visitors to take action at that moment.
About the author:
Tom Neuman is a Senior Partner with Medium Blue Internet
Marketing (http://www.mediumblue.com). For monthly tips on how
to get the most out of your internet presence, sign up for the
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