Not too long ago a mortgage broker
in Texas asked if I'd write a lead generation
package for his company-actually he just
wanted me to write a letter. I guess he didn't
need an envelope. More about that in a
moment.
So my first question was: who is your target
market? Tell me a little about the clients you're
looking to attract.
"Anyone that needs to refinance an adjustable
mortgage," he laughed.
Anyone? Now that's a tightly defined
demographic if I ever heard one.
So I politely educated this young grasshopper
about why he needs to narrow his base of
opportunities-just so he doesn't mail 50
million letters to all homeowners in America
with an adjustable rate mortgage.
I suggested, therefore, that he target a
defined geographic area, and maybe
homeowners with a house valued at over
$300,000 and who refinanced or purchased
their home more than two years ago.
"Sure, sure," he said.
"Great. So what's your offer?" I asked.
"You mean, how much I can pay you?"
"No," I said, "what are you offering your
prospects so they'll immediately rush to the
phone and call you?"
I heard then what I have heard SO many times
before...
An impassioned trashing of the competition:
...They' re only in it for the money; they don't
care about their customers; they don't
understand the products out there and how to
use them, they got their license and
immediately began selling-and then most of
them are out of business in a year or two...
So on and so forth.
And then I heard the obligatory self-praise
oratory:
That is... how much he cares about his
clients; how many years he's been in
business; how much continuing-ed training
he's had; how much value he
brings to the table; how much great
service he provides. So on and so
forth.
"Great, so what are you offering your
prospects so they'll immediately rush to the
phone and call you?" I repeated.
"...What do you mean?"
"Well," I asked, "why should Mr. and Mrs.
Homeowner call you and not the other
mortgage broker who is saying the exact same
thing? After all, they all DO say the same
thing-how much great service they provide;
how much they care about their clients-don't
they?"
"Yeah but..." So he then repeated, with even
more fervor, how much more he cares, how
much better service, etc., etc.
"Let me ask you this," I said, "How is your
prospect to know that you're better, that
you're the good guy and not the bad guy?
Telling them that it's so, won't make them
believe it-now will it? Somehow you've got to
PROVE it."
Then I told him about the importance of
testimonials, third-party endorsements,
accreditations, etc., etc.
"And all of that will help you prove to your
prospects that you are who you say you are.
But that's still not enough. Because if the
broker down the street has any marketing
savvy, he can and will prove it too-quoting
his track record, his honesty,
his competence, blah, blah-in all of his
marketing promotions.
"So you need a unique selling proposition,
don't you," I said.
"Huh?"
"We've got to find something that's unique
about you; about the way you conduct
business, how you reward your clients for their
loyalty-how you will do something specific,
measurable and desirable-so that these
prospects will want to pick up the phone and
call you."
"Like what?"
"Offer them something that your competition
doesn't"
"Like what?"
"Well, certainly not good service, great value
and a low interest rate. But it could be a
guarantee of some sort, a gift related to home
ownership, or a free report, like 'The TOP 10
Mistakes Homeowners Make When
Refinancing a Mortgage-that Always
Costs Them THOUSANDS of DOLLARS!'"
"Something no other broker is offering-or
saying-something that the prospect will find
useful and of value.
"And, you must provide urgency or scarcity, or
both. For example, make it a time or quantity
limited offer, but explain why! And not only
must it be believable-it must also be true!
"Finally, deliver your package in a way that will
guarantee that it will be opened and read."
"What do you mean?"
"Well, I can provide you with the best lead
generation package ever written, with the best
offer ever imagined-but if the envelope
doesn't get opened, what good will it do you?"
"So how can we guarantee that the envelope
will be opened?"
"Now," I said, "you're thinking like a marketer!"
And so I gave him some ideas, of course. And
I'll tell you what they were... in a future post.
Till then... own your market.
About the Author
Barry A. Densa is one of America's top freelance direct response copywriters. Visit www.WritingWithPersonality.com and see how Barry easily and quickly converts prospects into buyers using "salesmanship in print". And while there, sign up for his highly regarded FREE ezine:
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